Monday 29 October 2018

Success Criteria

In writing we have been learning to write a persuasive piece of writing. We have co constructed our success criteria together. Here is our instructor criteria check list.

      Title: Clearly states what you are going to be talking about

Example: Eating Edible Bugs

o         Hook: A way to pull your audience in (possibly a rhetorical question, weird and wacky fact or setting a scene).

Example: Are you sick and tired of the same old meal every single night, run out of inspiration for dinner ideas and the family just don’t appreciate your hard work around dinner?  Well now you can add the crunch back into your evening meals with interesting and creative dinner ideas.

o         Clearly stating what your topic is about / Statement

Example: I believe that everyone should cook with insects.   
I believe… I think… I strongly recommend…  In my opinion… that all people should eat insects

o         Background information: Use broad interest facts

Example: When people hear of others eating bugs they normally screw up their face and say, “Yuck!” But did you know most people who try insects actually end enjoying them.  My challenge for you today is to try insect.


o         Lead in sentence to your paragraphs (at the end)

There are many reasons why we should eat insects in our diet such as bug are healthy and low in fat, tasty fun treats and you be creative with recipes from all over the world.  




Friday 26 October 2018

Bike safety

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On Wednesday we went a bike safety lesson.

Paper Weaving

Today in class we did paper weaving. Here is my paper weaving.

Friday 19 October 2018

Kia Kaha- My Shield

In room 6 we all made a shield to show how we are unique. Here is my shield to show that I am special.

Kia Kaha- waka

In room 6 we have a waka to show how our class is unique.